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EXCERPT
MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE
By
Michelle M. Pillow
Chapter One
"Devon, I'm here." Chloe Masters looked
dazedly around the Las Vegas hotel lobby. The brilliant lights of the strip
glared through the hotel's massive front windows but she hardly noticed through
the dark lenses of her designer sunglasses. From her place on the phone booth
floor she could see the feet of numerous tourists sauntering past. Not one of
them distinguished her as the drunk, miserable woman who crouched in the corner
of the small cube. "I made it."
"What took you so long? Your flight got
there four hours ago. I know because I called the airport to check."
Chloe flinched as Devon Wentworth's
sobering voice boomed out of the phone. Devon had a way of talking too loud when
she was agitated.
"Devon, you have to understand. I wanted
to enjoy my last night of freedom," answered Chloe with a slight slur, as she
closed her eyes against the overbearingly bright lights that peeked through the
edge of her glasses. "I walked around the casinos trying to regain my composure.
You wouldn't have me making a bad impression, would you?"
"Why, what are you wearing?" Devon's
authoritative voice inquired sharply. "Please tell me it's not sweatpants. I was
afraid that you were going to do something like that. That is why I bought you
that little white dress."
"What does it matter?" Chloe snapped in
return. "I don't care what he's wearing."
"It matters because this is going to be
your new life." Devon softened her tone before continuing. "Chloe, I went to a
lot of trouble arranging this for you, despite what it might do to my reputation
if it was found out. I would be scorned out of every prestigious law firm in New
York. My career would be over. We have been through this. I can't change your
father's will."
"I know, Devon. Believe me, I know. It
wouldn't be his if you could," Chloe interjected. "You're a good friend to me."
"I gave you every chance to back out and
you said that you were confident that you wanted to go through with it." Devon
sighed in frustration. Chloe could hear the honking of horns behind her friend's
voice.
"Tell me again," Chloe paused and gulped,
"about him."
"He's everything you requested--adequate
looking, smart, and by his background check we know him to be loyal and
discreet. He also comes from old money, so he won't have a use for yours. Though
I don't know how much he's worth exactly. His financial information is well
protected." Devon's voice cut out. "Damned cellular phones! Chloe are you
there?"
"Yeah, I'm here," Chloe slurred.
"Hmm. The best part is he also agreed to
the prenuptial." Devon's stout voice vibrated in her hand. She was using her
most professional courtroom tone. "You haven't been drinking, have you? You know
you can't hold your liquor. What will Paul think if you go to him intoxicated?"
"I just had a little on the plane." Chloe
gave a short laugh as she set down her glass of scotch and soda. "And a few in
the casinos."
"Stop. I can hear the ice tinkling in your
glass. You're going to need your wits about you. You don't want him to think you
are a lush and back out, do you? He's your only chance."
Chloe moved her head away from the phone
to make a childish face at the receiver. She readjusted herself on the floor and
blinked heavily when a group of tourists wearing bright yellow jackets passed
too close.
"Chloe, are you listening to me?" Devon
sighed again in exasperation.
"Yeah, I'm here." Chloe took another
drink, this time crunching on an ice cube as she reached the bottom of the
glass. A piece of her wayward blond hair fell over her eyes. As she swatted at
it, her watchband got caught in a tangle. "Damn it."
"Chloe?" Devon's voice cut out again.
"What'd you say? I didn't hear you."
"Nothing."
"Fine," Devon huffed before lowering her
voice and slowing her words. "Now, Chloe, I want you to dial Paul's room and
tell him that you're there. Then I want you to finish what you went there to do.
Ten years will be over before you know it. When it is, you'll have your freedom
back and this nightmare will be over. Until then, maybe you could come to an
arrangement with him."
"Yeah, I know and with the right plastic
surgeon I won't look half bad in ten years." Chloe set the empty glass on the
ground. "I'll call you tomorrow with the horrible details."
"Fine. Remember, it's room three, five,
eight. Got it? 358." Devon sighed, refusing to dignify her friend's ill humor
with a comment. "Congratulations and good luck."
"Yeah," Chloe mumbled against the phone
and hung up.
"Yeah, good luck," she mumbled to herself.
Chloe shook her head and hugged her knees to her chest.
She took a deep breath before ambling
slowly to her feet. The liquor had taken more of an effect on her then she had
realized. She was drunk and didn't care. Somehow, she knew that it was one of
the reasons why she had picked Vegas--free liquor. The other reason was the
quick and painless ceremonies offered by the numerous chapels.
Pausing for a moment, she let the numbing
effect of the liquor take over her mind. She closed her eyes, wishing that Devon
would call her back and tell her she didn't have to go through with it. But she
knew it would never happen, just as she knew that she couldn't turn back.
Chloe made a beeline through the blur of
the crowd to the white courtesy phone. She stared at it, wondering if she should
run and get on a flight back to New York. If she did, no one would know of her
selfishness. Well, no one but herself. Taking a deep breath, she realized that
there was no other choice. She had to do it. There were a lot of people
depending on her.
Chloe picked up the phone and held it to
her ear. She tried to punch the buttons, but her fingers shook so badly that she
dialed the wrong number. Hanging up she cursed. "Come on, Chloe. Three, Five,
Eight. Time to be a big girl."
She picked up the phone and tried again.
"Hello," an irritated masculine voice
answered.
Chloe gasped at the low rumbling sound.
Shivers racked her spine as she pulled the phone back to look at it in stunned
amazement. Paul sounded nothing like she had imagined. That one word echoed
bravely in her head, capturing her voice in her throat. Swallowing over the lump
that formed behind her tongue, she breathed heavily and put the receiver to her
ear.
"Room service?" the voice questioned
sharply.
Chloe closed her eyes as the sound fell
over her like a stirring caress. She didn't know what to say. Her breath came
out in uneven pants as she tried to speak. Her body felt like it was on fire.
"Hello?" the voice asked in growing
curiosity in response to the nearly obscene breathing. Chloe could almost hear
the interested smile in his reverberating tone, as he whispered, "Who's there?"
"Yes, it's me. Sorry I'm late. I'm in the
lobby now waiting for you. I need you to come down so we can do this." Closing
her eyes to the hollowness that threatened to consume her, she ignored the
pleasure she derived from hearing his voice. Chloe swallowed hard. "I'm wearing
a white dress."
She hung up the phone with a decisive
clink so she couldn't back out. Almost falling to the ground in uneasiness, she
narrowed her eyes and turned to the elevators. Spotting a waitress passing
through the lobby, she absently waved her over and swiped a drink from her tray,
not caring what it was.
Downing it in three large gulps, she set
the glass back down with a thud. The waitress looked at Chloe in confusion, but
smiled when the woman drunkenly threw a fifty-dollar bill on her tray and
grabbed another drink.
With a wave of her liquor-laden hand,
Chloe dismissed her. But the glass never made it to her lips. Looking across the
lobby dimmed by dark sunglasses, she froze.
Gasping, she set the glass down by the
phone, untouched. She tugged insecurely at the tightly fitted hem of her short
skirt. A disturbingly piercing hazel-green gaze met her from across the crowded
hall. She suddenly felt very exposed. Lifting the glasses from her eyes, she
winced as the light hit her vision. The sounds of the busy lobby faded
completely, as she started toward the closing elevator door. Her heart raced,
beating a fearfully erotic rhythm through her veins.
"This can't be Paul," she muttered under
her panted breath. She suddenly wondered why she didn't insist on seeing a
picture first. "He's too big."
Dazedly, her hand moved to the dip of her
exposed cleavage. She could feel the rounded tops of her own breasts and quickly
pulled her hand away. Unable to stop her feet, she took a hesitant step forward.
Cocking her head to the side, she stumbled to a stop and waited for him to come
to her.
Paul's stride was relaxed and sure as he
confidently came through the crowd to reach her. He wore a business suit, very
appropriate for what they were about. His brown hair was neatly pulled back into
a ponytail, falling to his shoulders in soft waves. A smile curled on his lips
as his eyes dropped over her in appreciation. His penetrating gaze exuded sexual
prowess and intent. Chloe shivered, never having been looked at as if she were
about to be devoured.
As he stopped in front of her, she
swallowed audibly and tried to smile. Paul towered above her head so she was
forced to lean back to look at him. Instantly, her eyes found his parted
lips--firm and inviting. Drunkenly she swayed. Her knees weakened.
"Oh, hey," he said with a short laugh.
"Are you all right?"
Chloe shivered and briefly closed her
eyes. He put his hand on her elbow to keep her from falling over.
Yes, she thought when she heard the
disarming voice from the courtesy phone. This is definitely Paul.
When she opened her eyes, she noticed how
close he had drawn to her. She could see the beginnings of evening stubble on
his strong jaw. Breathing in his earthy scent, she answered weakly, "Yeah, I--"
Paul suddenly grinned, a naughtily
delectable movement. His voice drew into a low, husky murmur, as he asked
carefully, "Are you here about the contract?"
"Yeah," Chloe sighed in relief. She was
glad to have her mind on something she was able to comprehend. The emotions
fluttering though her brain were causing too much havoc. "I was afraid you
weren't the right man."
"No, I'm afraid I am," he stated with a
smile. "You're not disappointed are you?"
Chloe saw in his eyes that he already knew
she was anything but. Glancing over his shoulder, she shook her head and
mumbled, "No, of course not. Though, you're not what I expected."
"So, where do you want to do this?" His
eyes daringly dipped over her form.
"I have a car waiting outside if you
like," she returned. He smiled and nodded his head. Looping his arm through
hers, he kept her steady as he led her outside. Belatedly, she added, "We could
go there."
Chloe felt his heat soaking into her skin
like a sudden blaze of tempestuous fire. Her midsection lit with liquid heat in
response. Suddenly, she became all too aware of the heady desert air on her
breasts and legs.
"I must admit I have never done this
before," he said. "I mean over a paid contract."
Chloe laughed lightly in confusion and
pointed at the awaiting limousine. "Well, Paul, I…."
"Everest," he interjected.
"Oh," she frowned, confused. "I'm sorry,
I…."
"Don't mention it," he dismissed her
mistake easily with a wave of his hand.
Paul Everest Lucas, thought Chloe. She
couldn't help herself as her eyes strayed to his athletic backside. He leaned
over to open the limousine door for her. Interesting name for a very interesting
man.
As the car began to move, Everest leaned
over her seat and hit the window button to block out the driver. Chloe tilted
her chin in surprise. His thick neck came close to her cheek and she saw the
steady beating of his pulse under the smooth texture of his skin. Then, as he
sat back, he began to remove his jacket. Chloe watched in avid interest. The car
jolted over a bump and she gasped in surprise.
"You don't mind if I get comfortable, do
you?" he asked. Setting his jacket aside, he took off his tie. His lips lined
with a devilish smirk and his eyes glittered with promise. "I've been in
business meetings all day."
"No. Of course not," she answered. Turning
to the mini-bar, she poured them each a glass of champagne and handed one to
him. Drinking it a little too quickly, her gaze stayed boldly on him as he undid
the top button on his shirt.
"I have to tell you that I have had a
little too much to drink tonight," he admitted. "So you must forgive me if I'm
not too chivalrous."
"Yeah, me too." The limousine bumped and
champagne spilled over her chin and down her throat. Chloe licked her lips,
watching as his mouth parted in moist offering.
"Come over here," he said, finishing off
his drink with one swallow. The glass slipped from his fingers onto the floor.
With a low rumble coming seductively from his throat, he motioned her to him.
Captured by his penetrating gaze, Chloe
obeyed the command. Opening her mouth, she was about to speak as she sat next to
him. She had no time for words. His mouth crushed passionately to hers. Chloe
gasped in surprise as she felt his tongue instantly in her mouth. She could
taste the stout hint of expensive whiskey on him. His hands grasped her
shoulders to keep her from backing away.
"You're a damned sexy woman," he growled
against her mouth, as he continued with his deep kiss.
Her fingers shook at the admission,
loosening their hold on her champagne glass. Small drops of liquid dripped onto
his back before the glass fell to the car floor. It noisily clanked into his
discarded glass as the car started and stopped. Everest didn't even notice.
Forcefully, he pushed her to lie back on
the seat. His tongue traced over her teeth, exploring her and demanding she
explore him with a returned kiss. Discovering the taste of champagne on her
neck, his mouth followed the delicious trail. His hands found their way to her
legs. Running his fingers over her calves, he massaged them gently before
working his way up to her inner thigh. "Those lawyers must know what they're
doing, for the moment I saw you I wanted to rip your clothes from you. I'll have
to remember to thank them."
"I," Chloe began, but couldn't finish. She
was too drunk to think straight and his confident hands felt way too nice
against her skin. Everest urged his hardened arousal against her. She was
helpless against the firm press of his body, under the slanting of his mouth.
Moaning, she ran her hands into his shoulder length hair, pulling it free of its
tie.
He chuckled in careless enjoyment against
her lips as he broke off the kiss. His hand strayed to her neck to pull the thin
dress strap from her shoulder. Tugging it down over one arm, he unveiled her
lacy white bra.
Everest groaned in masculine contentment
and lightly traced a line over the curves of her breasts. When she sighed in
approval, he circled her nipples into hard peaks, leaving them behind lace as he
continued lower. Staring mischievously into her aroused eyes, he inched his hand
up her skirt. The material bunched around her hips and he growled in delight.
His eyebrows rose slightly as he found the matching white panties.
"Mmm," he licked his lips. He rubbed his
fingers over the white lace covering her hot center. Chloe jolted in surprise.
Chuckling, he nuzzled his face near the top of her breast. Tracing his tongue in
a hot wave along the edge of her bra, he murmured hoarsely, "How about we take
off our clothes?"
With an expert shift of his hips, his
raised manhood was firmly placed against her inner thighs. Chloe moaned as he
skillfully thrust himself along her in a slow, controlled stroke. Her hands
found his masculine chest. Every inch of him was hard, unrelenting muscle. She
fumbled to unbutton his shirt, moaning when she discovered his smooth, bronzed
chest.
Giving up on the buttons, she was about to
unzip his pants when the car lurched unexpectedly to a stop, startling them with
a surprising jolt. Everest rolled off of her and landed on the floor with a
thud, barely missing the glasses. Chloe sat up in astonishment, trying to cover
herself.
"Are you all right?" she questioned when
she had regained her wits.
Before he could answer, the limousine's
driver lowered the window between them. Completely aware of what he had
interrupted, he said with a chuckle, "We're here, ma'am."
Chloe nodded, taking a deep breath.
Glancing longingly at Everest's protruding member pushing against his pants, she
uttered, "Can you give us another minute?"
"I'm sorry, ma'am. I have another client
to pick up later tonight. You only have about fifteen minutes here before I have
to take you back to the hotel. They're waiting for you inside." The driver
turned and stepped out of the car.
Quickly, Chloe covered herself. With a
blush fanning her delicate features, she closed her eyes.
Everest growled as he crawled back up on
the seat. Leaning to her, he stroked his thumb over the racing pulse at her
slender neck. Reluctantly, he mumbled, "Well, I suppose we had best get business
over with. Though, you'll be coming back to the hotel with me, right?"
Chloe nodded. Swallowing hard, she said,
"I have nowhere else to be."
"Good," Everest sighed in relief. Then,
taking a deep breath and then another, he asserted, "I need a drink if I'm going
to be forced to wait."
He grabbed a bottle of hard liquor from
the bar. Taking several gulps, he swallowed it to combat his raging desire.
Then, handing the bottle to his companion's outstretched hand, he watched as she
followed suit.
© copyright August 2004, Michelle M.
Pillow
This is a work of fiction. All characters, events, and places are of the
author’s imagination and not to be confused with fact. Any resemblance to living
persons or events is merely coincidence.
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REVIEWS
Erotic Escapades
"5 Tattoos! A wonderfully
romantic book!"
Reviewed by Ophelia. 2006
Novel Spot
4 Quills! Michelle Pillow is turning out to be a terrific surprise. I knew
she'd mastered Horror; and I knew she had vampires down pat. I knew she handled
the Paranormal novel like a champ. It shouldn't have taken me so much by
surprise to see that she could do a Contemporary Romance too. This is a fun read
set in a contemporary situation with people the reader gets to know and care
about. This is amazing for a first Contemporary. Everest and Chloe have a
dynamic chemistry, tremendous sexual tension that draws them together with an
inevitable conflict that drives them apart. Michelle Pillow makes it all look so
easy. I can't wait to see what genre she'll conquer next.
Reviewed By: Allie B
(c) Sept 004
The Road to Romance
After reading MOUNTAIN’S
CAPTIVE, I’ve become a new fan of Michelle M. Pillows. Ms. Pillows developed
well rounded characters that are real and likeable. The relationship between
Chloe and Everest starts out as a tremendous desire and ends up developing
into true love. MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE captured my heart and I highly recommend
it.
Reviewed by Jennifer Ray
for The Road to Romance
Love Romances
5 HEARTS!
"It seems that whatever genre Michelle M. Pillow writes,
she does a marvelous job. Definitely entertaining, the characters are
multi-dimensional and full of emotion and passion. This book has a good plot that is exciting and sensual
and keeps the reader turning the pages. The secondary characters add spice
to the story without detracting from the hero and heroine. Ms Pillow writes
passionate, sensual love scenes full of emotion. After reading this story,
the reader will certainly need some ice or the significant other.
Ms. Pillow certainly has a knack for
drawing the reader into the story immediately and not telling everything
right away. It takes a little while to find out why Chloe has to get
married, and this causes some friction between her and Everest, which is
deliciously played out throughout the book. This reviewer has been
following Ms Pillow’s writing career with delight and is always excited when
a new book is published."
Valerie
Ecataromance Reviews
5 STARS!
"For her first endeavor into the contemporary romance genre, Michelle Pillow
has penned a story where the plot, characterization and sexuality come together
to create a book worthy of high praise. The story line is a vivid and stirring
portrayal of a couple, who must endure much heartache before they can find their
personal happiness. This distinctive story will have you smiling one moment,
feeling the characters’ emotional pain the next and occasionally turning up the
a/c during the steamy love scenes. The characters were so realistically drawn
that I was totally pulled into their complicated lives. With the captivating
plot, dynamic characterization and sensual love story, MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE will
have readers devouring this exceptional tale...
With the sexual tension off the scale, Ms. Pillow has written a love story
with passionate, honorable and charming characters. Their emotional and moving
story will pull at readers’ hearts, as we see their hopes, dreams, and anguish.
MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE proves Michelle Pillow will be around for a long time as an
author, as her stories will not soon be forgotten."
Amelia Richard, eCataRomance Reviews
Romance Junkies
4.5 BLUE RIBBONS!
"MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE is a wickedly sexy story
with a dollop of sensitivity. The sprinkles of wit and the aching, yet
pleasurable moments in it make the novel an awesome read. Everest Beaumont is
the wildly delicious stranger every woman would love to meet and fall in love
with. Chloe Masters is successful, sexy and vulnerable, an irresistible
combination and every woman’s envy. Michelle M. Pillow deserves loud applauding
for her efforts. There are no unfinished details and Michelle keeps the story
fit, fast paced, and fun filled. From the start of the story to the very end,
the intertwining of sensuality and tenderness is breathtaking and the reader is
hooked! The encounters between Everest and Chloe are luscious, to say the least.
MOUNTAIN’S CAPTIVE is so captivating that it
is a must-buy-must-read-and-must-keep book!"
By Dee Herga
Sizzling Romances
4.5 Flames
"MOUNTAIN'S CAPTIVE was an enjoyable read from start to finish.
Michelle M. Pillow has a talent for creating interesting and three-dimensional
characters and Chloe and Everest are fine examples of this. On the surface,
Chloe seems shallow and pampered, however, later in the story, she turns out to
be much more noble and altruistic. Everest's personality resembles the mountain
that he's named after, strong and indomitable. His pride keeps him from
admitting that he has strong feelings for our heroine.
Chloe and Everest are a very sexy couple. Their love scenes nearly ignite the
page. Their attraction was undeniable and the passion palpable.
Ms. Pillow knows how to construct a satisfying love story and MOUNTAIN'S
CAPTIVE is one of her best. I recommend it to anyone who loves romance that
blossoms under unusual circumstances and seeming insurmountable obstacles.
MOUNTAIN'S CAPTIVE is a shining example of Ms. Pillow's talent and I am
eagerly anticipating more of her work. "
Reviewed by Miaka
Fallen Angel Reviews
4 ANGELS
"Mountain’s Captive was a highly erotic story with enough romance to
warm your heart. With two memorable characters and a quickly paced storyline,
this is one book you will not forget easily!"
Reviewed by: Susan T
The Romance Studio
4 HEARTS!
"This
is a great book to read if you love stories that start off as a mix up. Everest
is a sexy man with an alpha attitude that will have your toes curling. Chloe is
a strong yet weak willed heroine, who will make you want to scream. Together
this couple is explosive both in bed and out of it. Everest's grandfather and
his match making ways bring about comic relief. The sex is hot and this couple
compliments each other perfectly as the city girl and the country boy. I
recommend this book if you want a great read with a great plot."
Reviewer: Angel
Brewer
August 30, 2004
Enchanted in Romance
4 UNICORNS!
"Mountain’s Captive
is a sweet love story between two loners that come together in passion .... The
well-developed characteristics of Chloe and Everest make them easy to fall in
love with. Michelle M. Pillow’s secondary characters are equally wonderful. ...
I recommend Mountain’s Captive if you like a sweet romance."
Nikita
Romance Reviews Today
"MOUNTAIN'S CAPTIVE is an offbeat, humorous tale about
life's funny quirks...
MOUNTAIN'S CAPTIVE is Michelle M. Pillow's first foray
into contemporary romance, and she has done an excellent job of capturing the
reader's interest. Ms. Pillow has crafted a witty story with quirky characters
and situations, and readers will root for Chloe and Everest to make it as a
couple. I highly recommend MOUNTAIN'S CAPTIVE for anyone looking for a fun
tale."
Patti Fischer

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